Saturday, June 30, 2007

Part I Have you seen the Rain?

"Damn"
Rahul sweared looking up at the barren sky, not a speck of cloud was to be seen. Nearly 3 months have passed since it rained last. He lookied at me, and asked about the weather prediction. I smiled at him. Then he began to to tell me, "There was this silly girl, whom I love dearest, who is crazy like a colt, and believes that stars are god's daisy chain ( ahem ahem, plagiarism I hear). Oh, I almost forgot to mention, she also have this wierd idea that raim makes her more happy than anything. On reflection, I remember her alluding me as the rain of her heart, her life. But she also reminded me constantly that I am as unreliable as the rain; one time it is just a drizzle, another a sh9ower, sometimes accompanied with squall, sometimes thunder and lightening. You can get the general idea about what she thinks about the timing and the company I keep.

"But one day, she finally got frustrated with me. In the heat of an argument, she condemned me as a bringer of misery to her life and a destroyer of love ... And she went away, to a place wehre it does not rain, saying that the rain would remind her of me."

~tbc ( to be continued)

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh my that was rather harsh. The poor girl would have had to live in a desert or something now!

Save for the stupid comment, your promise for literary beauty and imagery rings on, especially the lyrical way Rahul speaks.

Just a tip: Do read this part once again in the post editor window. There are quite a few typos

Phoenix said...

the other side of the story...i bet u;d ruin the romance by the end!

johney said...

@akshay
Yes, the poor silly girl. It is desert for her how. And yes, there are lots of typos. I seem to delight in typos.

@phoenix
Hehe, yes, I am evil!
Not really, I don't know if it would be happy ending or sad ending.

sanjay said...

Is this girl meenakshi beautiful hehehe. "She has gone to lands where it never rains." Are thses lands in india if yes then they wont be far from my home may be i should give a try hehhehe ;-)

johney said...

@Sanjay
yes, she is beautiful. hehe. But she already has Rahul; or does she? hehe